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    Lost her song

    She had lost her song
    and her will to live
    Everything went wrong,
    nothing to believe
    So she plunged the knife
    to her bleeding heart
    Aimless in her life
    she chose to depart




  • #2
    oooooh no ATL. tragedy

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you for reading -- watching a tragic movie so I tried my hand at it. :-)

  • #3
    Hi, AG, this is great, and wonderful to know the inspiration!

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you very much MH. I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment.

  • #4
    Nicely done, AtL! A complete tragedy in eight lines.

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    • #5
      Thank you very much Mutaddo for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it.

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      • #6
        I thought of Romeo and Juliette!

        Artful expression of despair.

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        • AlexandratheLate
          AlexandratheLate commented
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          Thank you very much Dwayne. I appreciate your reading and commenting.

      • #7
        Very tragic but beautiful in its presentation. You do human misery very well

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        • AlexandratheLate
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          Thank you very much RT. :-)

      • #8
        There's more to come on this one rhymetime. :-)

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        • rhymetime
          rhymetime commented
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          I look forward to it

      • #9
        Thank you rhymetime. It's posted.

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