Lost her song

[AlexandratheLate]

Lost her song

She had lost her song
and her will to live
Everything went wrong,
nothing to believe
So she plunged the knife
to her bleeding heart
Aimless in her life
she chose to depart

[lunar glide]

oooooh no ATL. tragedy

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you for reading -- watching a tragic movie so I tried my hand at it. :-)

[MHenry]

Hi, AG, this is great, and wonderful to know the inspiration!

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much MH. I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment.

[Muttado1sb]

Nicely done, AtL! A complete tragedy in eight lines.

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much Mutaddo for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it.

[DWAYNE]

I thought of Romeo and Juliette!

Artful expression of despair.

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much Dwayne. I appreciate your reading and commenting.

[rhymetime]

Very tragic but beautiful in its presentation. You do human misery very well

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much RT. :-)

[AlexandratheLate]

There's more to come on this one rhymetime. :-)

[rhymetime]

I look forward to it

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you rhymetime. It's posted.