Golden son

[AlexandratheLate]

Golden son

Northern sun, golden son
Six foot two, eyes of blue
Infectious smile, all the while
Hidden sadness, veiled madness

Eery feeling, hate concealing
Causing dread, lightly tread
Feel obscure, insecure
Never please, needs release

Wants acceptance, already sentenced
Fled from home, feels alone
Wants to find love, fit like a glove
Tries to fit in, uncomfortable in his skin

[MHenry]

Tight rhyme scheme painting a vivid portrait of a troubled soul. Well done, AG!

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you MH. I think the last lines need a little revamping.

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much Grant. You have been missed!!

[lunar glide]

rhyming is intense like the entire feeling. 😄

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much LG. :-)

[DWAYNE]

This is an exceptional write, gentle and emotive.

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much Dwayne!! :-)

[rhymetime]

Sadly we probably encounter people like this every day and miss their pain. Someone will read this and think "yea,she gets it, that is exactly how it feels, maybe I'm not alone "

Beautiful.

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much rhymetime!! :-)

[Dee Camper]

Amazing how few, well-chosen, words can be so impacting! I've been KOed!!

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much Mutaddo!!

[AlexandratheLate]

Thank you very much Dee.