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    appetizers over
    the bride and groom have arrived
    eyes eat them alive

  • #2
    Great, lg! This is definitely a (delicious) senryu! At least so far as I am able to judge!

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    • #3
      thanks maestro! I'm having fun 😄

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      • #4
        I like this one too LG!

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        • lunar glide
          lunar glide commented
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          im glad RLW. 😄

      • #5
        I like this one a lot lunar glide and while you wrote wedding i was writing funeral... both w/ feasting!
        Last edited by Suz-zen; 07-18-2016, 07:50 PM.

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        • #6
          hahaha!

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          • #7
            Yes! Very zestacious!

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            • #8
              Very nice, lg!

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              • #9
                How cleaver! LOL

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                • #10
                  So cheeky LG. love it!!

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