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lunar glide

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wedding dinner

07-18-2016, 03:50 PM

appetizers over
the bride and groom have arrived
eyes eat them alive
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MHenry

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#2

07-18-2016, 03:58 PM

Great, lg! This is definitely a (delicious) senryu! At least so far as I am able to judge!
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lunar glide

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07-18-2016, 04:07 PM

thanks maestro! I'm having fun 😄
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RhymeLovingWriter

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Resting on a smile...
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#4

07-18-2016, 04:15 PM

I like this one too LG!
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07-18-2016, 04:16 PM

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im glad RLW. 😄
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07-18-2016, 05:57 PM

I like this one a lot lunar glide and while you wrote wedding i was writing funeral... both w/ feasting!

Last edited by Suz-zen; 07-18-2016, 07:50 PM.
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lunar glide

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07-18-2016, 06:21 PM

hahaha!
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07-19-2016, 12:45 AM

Yes! Very zestacious!
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Muttado1sb

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Nothing to see here
Just a spiller of blather
Quite common, really
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#8

07-19-2016, 12:14 PM

Very nice, lg!
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Dee Camper

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#9

07-19-2016, 02:46 PM

How cleaver! LOL
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#10

07-19-2016, 05:07 PM

So cheeky LG. love it!!
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