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    I'm sitting at the reception desk, success is within my reach
    when all of a sudden the front door opens and in walks Robin Leach
    Yes, that Robin Leach, the Hollywood peach, "Lifestyles of the Rich and Famous"
    I hope when we're done his business I've won exchanging a handshake between us

    A few things must happen before we proceed, strike up a dialogue, explore what he needs
    greet him with a smile, sow relationship seeds, ask him to sit, let's see where this leads
    'Good afternoon Mr. Leach, how are you today, I recognized your voice and accent right away
    " Cheerio my friend, that's funny you would say, when I open my mouth, I ain't no Olivier

    "I'm looking for a home two hours from the Apple, with grazing horses and Hudson Valley cattle
    Get up with the roosters and put on the saddle, a gallop in the forest away from life's battles
    With Champagne wishes and caviar dreams, spare no expense, I'm as rich as it seems
    I've never had a problem living within means, so find me my palace with mahogany beams"

    "I know just the place near bright city lights, but far enough away where mother nature delights
    bordering Mohonk Mountain with fish and hiking rights, carriage trails for snowshoes, dirt and mountain bikes
    A short ride will take you, to the village nightlife grand, music at the Gilded Otter, with all your favorite bands
    Kayak on the Wallkill river, or fish for small mouth bass, Vine Van Gogh's painting class, use those talented hands

    "This sounds great my real estate mate, I'm ready to pull the trigger
    Please don't wait or hesitate, this moment has never been bigger
    As you contemplate what's on your plate, the stakes have never been higher
    Write in the date, I'll take this estate, you've made me a happy buyer"

    (c) Bobby Del Boy July 18, 2016
    Last edited by Bobby Del Boy; 07-18-2016, 02:26 PM.

  • #2
    Great one, BDB! Your stable of clients is only rivaled by...your stable of clients!

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    • #3
      MHenry LOL! You've been a loyal friend to The Real Estate Waiting Game

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      • #4
        I love what MHenry said about you EXCELLENT write!! Love it too!; are there 17 others before this?

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        • #5
          this is awesome! gotta find time to read 17!

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          • #6
            This is more than just being on a roll Bobby - you weren't kidding when you talked about doing volumes. Very, very enjoyable write. Each one has made me smile at your whimsical use of sayings, song titles, etc. and I love how you work it into your 'featured guest' scenario. The setting is great - because where else could this happen? You have moved from 'Just a Guy in a Diner' to 'Real Estate Agent to the Stars Extraordinaire' (at least for this series). Bravo! (And I still need to catch up too on some of the past ones I missed.)

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            • #7
              Dee Camper yes there are 17 more and I am planning a book. Thanks for your enthusiastic response. Welcome back!

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                YOU'RE TOO AWESOME!! It's good to be back (I've much to learn); Thank you!

            • #8
              lunar glide ,thank you and glad you like. #17 is still on page 1 or 2. Y plan on a book when I hit 25. Thanks again for enjoying...

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              • #9
                ok. I'm preordering 😛

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              • #10
                RhymeLovingWriter , your enthusiasm and encouraging words are truly appreciated my poet friend. You are a generous soul and I appreciate you!

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              • #11
                , I would like for you and my poet friends who haven't seen yet, to read critique and maybe even enjoy. Sorry to "rhymezone's kentucky derby"

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                  Sorry it took so long been in the middle of a move. It is as great as I would expect coming from such a talented writer as yourself! I love your real estate tales! Bravo friend!

              • #12
                , thanks buddy and I have since posted # 19. 6 away now from looking for a publisher or self publishing

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                • #13
                  Don't know how I missed this one Bobby but just another great one to add!!

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                  • #14
                    AlexandratheLate , that's OK. That's how it goes on tthe zone. Glad you enjoyed and as always, a pleasure.

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