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  • Suz-zen
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    hahah! More hahahahah's!

  • Suz-zen
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    thank you DWAYNE!

  • lunar glide
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    lol yes. tanner wrote about being sent to Siberia!

  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    lol LG - ask MHenry - or have we already witnessed that convo?

  • lunar glide
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    I wonder what will happen to him when he forgets anniversary or loses the remote ­čśä

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  • DWAYNE
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    Such fun.

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  • Suz-zen
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    Indeed!!!! changes the meaning!! kind of like 'old broad' a term i used to detest now i am rather fond!

  • Suz-zen
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    Thank you M!!

  • Suz-zen
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    yes RLW! you can change the count per line.... but stay at 17 for the entire piece. that is what I read in a publication for rules to be published in this genre!

  • MHenry
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    You changed from older to old. I bet you struggled with decision! Either one works!

  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Wait - so the syllable count is changeable per line? So many things to remember and I'm starting to get them jumbled in my head. I guess whatever comes out is OK then?

    As to your poem Suz-zen - very cute. I particularly like your later comment about prey/predator? That line can be murky sometimes, can't it?

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  • MHenry
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    Yes, I have seen that, too.

  • Muttado1sb
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    Very amusing, Suz-zen!

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  • Suz-zen
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    P.S.- 17 or fewer syllables total is the 'rule' but syllable count per line not a hard and fast rule. you can write 3 lines or even less. I have read one liners and two that are strong.
    Need to count this one and maybe edit down.... (?)

  • Suz-zen
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    thanks MHenry. while reading an online Haiku publication I was led to more like this. the syllable count was pretty much thrown out, allowing for free-verse senyru if you will. Works with my style....I actually wrote a longer poem with this theme SAT night at a trendy spot in Del Mar... so many short skirts ... the bar was the watering hole... who was the predator... the prey???
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