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    Lusty guy chases
    skirts to champagne bar
    celebrates luck with old wife
    Last edited by Suz-zen; 07-18-2016, 10:28 AM.

  • #2
    Haha! This is delicious! Great work Suz-zen!

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    • MHenry
      MHenry commented
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      Yes, I have seen that, too.

    • MHenry
      MHenry commented
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      You changed from older to old. I bet you struggled with decision! Either one works!

    • Suz-zen
      Suz-zen commented
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      Indeed!!!! changes the meaning!! kind of like 'old broad' a term i used to detest now i am rather fond!

  • #3
    Very amusing, Suz-zen!

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    • Suz-zen
      Suz-zen commented
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      Thank you M!!

  • #4
    Wait - so the syllable count is changeable per line? So many things to remember and I'm starting to get them jumbled in my head. I guess whatever comes out is OK then?

    As to your poem Suz-zen - very cute. I particularly like your later comment about prey/predator? That line can be murky sometimes, can't it?

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    • Suz-zen
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      yes RLW! you can change the count per line.... but stay at 17 for the entire piece. that is what I read in a publication for rules to be published in this genre!

  • #5
    Such fun.

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  • #6
    I wonder what will happen to him when he forgets anniversary or loses the remote 😄

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      lol LG - ask MHenry - or have we already witnessed that convo?

    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      lol yes. tanner wrote about being sent to Siberia!

    • Suz-zen
      Suz-zen commented
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      hahah! More hahahahah's!
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