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  • Suz-zen
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    thank you @grant hayes... i will wear the moniker today! I rather liked this one! As I look at the moon sometimes a I see tattoos in the night! and the daytime too! I made myself laugh envisioning this. Who is to claim artist?

  • grant hayes
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    You are maestra, truly!

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  • Suz-zen
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    thank you Alex! These are an interesting way to use the mind... very different for me... unnatural. Appreciate the support!

  • AlexandratheLate
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    Another one well done Suz-zen!

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  • Suz-zen
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    it is a unique method. it can work to filter the complex and at other times the complex needs more to get it just right as you so often do lunar glide

  • Suz-zen
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    @ I have to give a nod to Samuel Smith
    his post led me to online publications... that led me to this format. So much to learn!!

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  • rhymetime
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    Very descriptive and well presented. A new format to play with

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  • lunar glide
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    well done maestra 😄 I think we all needed a lesson on haiku? more to it than just 5-7-5

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  • Muttado1sb
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    Very nice, Suz-zen! And now I have learned of the senryu and that they are different (and why and how) from the haiku. Always something on this site. Thanks!

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  • Suz-zen
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    thank you!! I was never aware of them until tonight... i like them.

  • MHenry
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    Love this, Suz-zen! I have never intentionally written a senryu, but I bet some of my haiku are really senryu!

    Or maybe they aren't either!
    Last edited by MHenry; 07-18-2016, 11:40 AM.

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    waning moon craters clear
    tattoo artist carries on
    crying copyright infringement


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