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  • Suz-zen
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    the bits of 'nothing' is what makes a lifetime, if only we would stop to see that... and so poetically you did just [email protected] 1sb! I applaud your skills.

  • Muttado1sb
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    Thanks, lunar glide! It wasn't effortless, though. Getting enough of the right words to carry the story at the right speed took concentration as it tried to finish itself way too quickly.

  • Muttado1sb
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    Thank you, DWAYNE! I had to keep slowing myself down as I wrote it because it tried to spill out.

  • lunar glide
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    you pulled this off effortlessly!

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  • DWAYNE
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    The style and pace of this poem, accentuates its content.

    Very well done!

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  • Muttado1sb
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    Good job using the ending, too. ;-)

  • Muttado1sb
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    Thank you, Bobby! I know my reading is mostly of things here these days.

  • Muttado1sb
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    Thank you, RLW. And you're welcome. I hope it helps you wind down.

  • Muttado1sb
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    Thanks, MH. I'm glad you found it something. By nothing I meant using a poem to describe a passive activity, so ''romp'' is an interesting choice of descriptors. :-)

  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    This is quite relaxing to peruse Muttado1sb. I think I'm going to reread it tonight when I am wanting to wind down because it has a calming effect on my spirit. Thank you!

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  • MHenry
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    Read your own work, two birds killed!

  • Bobby Del Boy
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    A great capture of the book reading process. Sometimes more difficult for those of us who enjoy writing too. Whet do I do, read or write? Hmmmm????

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  • MHenry
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    Some of the best things are made of nothing, Muttado1sb. But this isn't nothing! It's definitely something. A four syllable romp from here to there! Nicely done! A fun read indeed (ha'sonnet ending...taken!)

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  • Muttado1sb
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    Thanks, Suz-zen. Going for a little calming by trying to make a bit of nothing into a poem.

  • Suz-zen
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    lovely lovely Muttado1sb no zooming no crawling... nice pace throughout!!

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