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  • Seems Like Smoke and Mirrors

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    Last edited by Sumyanna; 07-17-2016, 08:30 AM.

  • #2
    "but that you define
    her shape
    her lines
    with meager tools
    that betray her value."

    WOW. How beautiful this is! I don't know if you meant this to be literal or figurative. I can certainly apply it either way. Very well said

    thank you.

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    • Sumyanna
      Sumyanna commented
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      I believe in some ways, it was meant to be both :-) So very glad you liked it rhymetime.

  • #3
    However you meant this, this is excellent!

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  • #4
    For being hard to describe ''with meager tools'' you do a wonderful job, Sumyanna. As always in your posts here.

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    • Sumyanna
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      It is never in the failing of the poet - but in others that desire to draw the lines with meager tools. It is people's perception of other people despite their inability to understand them. Not because they are blind, but because they refuse to see. Hope that makes a little sense Muttado1sb

  • #5
    Birthing dreams...a noble endeavor - so beautiful - my heart hears this as an ode to mother earth.

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    • Sumyanna
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      Thank you very much RhymeLovingWriter So glad you liked it. Truthfully, the joy of poetry is not only in its making, but also in its reception. It requires creativity to write it but it also requires creativity to see its breaths. There is no wrong way to interpret :-)

  • #6
    This is great, Sumyanna! You allow the reader to insert whatever misunderstood beauty they desire! Very well written!

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    • Sumyanna
      Sumyanna commented
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      Thank you very much MHenry So glad you liked it :-)

  • #7
    whatever you did during your time away!!! this is gorgeous writing

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    • Sumyanna
      Sumyanna commented
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      A lot of soul searcing lunar glide Introspection sometimes helps greatly as well as the silent moments when all you can do is absorb everything :-)
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