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    The rapacious beast grown ponderous in its bloated appetite
    Still consumes the lives of the unwary awed byits might
    Hynotised by the fear of social exclusion we feed it
    Every morsal of our dreary day hoping it will be a hit
    For the reward of likes of the others confined presence
    The behemoth drains the energy of the soul for its essence
    Assimliating whilst devouring our personal data to feed its gluttony
    Like a squirrel storing for the winter it keeps information in custody
    Stealer of time, It pilfers from the unwary whose lifetime slips away
    Sorry but it is time to go and update my Facebook status for today




  • #2
    Yes. Quite nicely put Parkinsonspoet!

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  • #3
    Interesting writing Pp.

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  • #4
    This is great. At first I was not sure where the ride was taking us. It is a perfect build up to Facebook. I love this verse

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    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      Thank you very much as well

  • #5
    it's a monster that devours itself !

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    • #6
      Hahahahahahaha, kudos, Parkinsonspoet. Spot on!

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      • #7
        Well expressed Pp! Now, we have Pokemon Go, the newest sensation. A very clever way to get social media off the couch and in to the way of moving traffic!

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        • #8
          Poignant, eloquent, entertainment!

          Well done!

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