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  • Pancake Heaven

    A golden river sizzles
    thick tan lava answers the call.
    Bubble Bubble golden crisp,
    time for fluffy cloud of heaven to flip.
    More sizzle of the Golden river,
    until crisp meets its waiting porcelain bed.
    Warm golden nectar of the God's fills the empty space,
    only heaven knows all its right place.
    Flowing like the river down the mountainous side,
    tender, flaky, crisp buttery sweet full of pride.
    Into the watering pink moist cave it goes,
    Pleasure unlike anyone knows.
    Eyes are closed,
    the senses are filled.
    Happiness is achieved in one delectable meal.
    Pancake heaven yes I believe,
    Golden pleasure is most definitely achieved.

  • #2
    Delectable LtD! Now can you write one about hash browns??? Welcome to the RhymeZone!

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    • Lucy the Dreamer
      Lucy the Dreamer commented
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      Thank you very much. Cooking is my real talent pancakes are my passion. Hash browns you say, I'll put it on the list.

  • #3
    Someone needed to write this and you wrote it in delicious fashion. Love! Yes, welcome to the Zone indeed!

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  • #4
    Wonderful descriptive terms, Lucy, elevating the pancake to volcanic stature as the delectable tastes erupt over the peaks and valleys of your pink cave.

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    • Lucy the Dreamer
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      Thank you very much! Pancakes are a true eruption of pleasure.

  • #5
    Lucy the Dreamer please serve me a stack of them cakes!! That was beautiful!! thank you!

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    • Lucy the Dreamer
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      Absolutely. They're always better when you share them. Thank you for your kind words

  • #6
    Very vivid, world-wielding imagery, Lucy; you've done for pancakes what no other has, I think. I'd like to see this powerful word smithing extend to new worlds!

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  • #7
    this is wonderful lucy! hmmm How about an ode to pizza next?

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    • Lucy the Dreamer
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      As much as I'd love to indulge an ode to pizza, I'm thinking an ode to red Bull must come first 😉

  • #8
    Yummy!!! Made me want pancakes. Great imagery!!!

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    • Lucy the Dreamer
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      Thank you Alexandrathelate.... pancakes for everyone

  • #9
    fyi this is publishable by IHOP hahaaa

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    • Lucy the Dreamer
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      As long as I get a life time of pancakes that would be fabulous! I bet they'd make moon shaped pancakes for the moon man.

  • #10
    Welcome indeed! Only a poet would see verse as the pancake was prepared, served and eaten. So you must be a poet.

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    • Lucy the Dreamer
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      Thank you rhymetime. I think we all have poet in us. It just takes passion, inspiration and dreams to bring it out. A title I will definitely treasure
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