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  • Out of Love

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    Last edited by Bison; 12-10-2016, 07:47 PM.

  • #2
    This is very good. It is a nice read. The turn at the end, well paced, well done, Bison.
    Last edited by Muttado1sb; 07-06-2016, 09:02 PM.

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    • #3
      Ouch. End of relationship - never easy.

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      • Bison
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        Merely an exercise in repetition, RLW. Nothing recent has beseeched my sensibilities.

      • RhymeLovingWriter
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        Nicely turned then!

      • Bison
        Bison commented
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        Thanks. I'm trying to get out of my comfort zone!

    • #4
      I can see this as a song, Bison.

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      • Suz-zen
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        Definitely

    • #5
      I always enjoy reading your verse. This is superb! It is concise, direct with nothing hidden. You step outside your comfort zone very well.

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      • #6
        Oh Oh Oh YES!!! Love this one Bison another one i wish that i had written! Bravo!

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