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    Achlyssa Myst

    Runs naked through the forest
    chasing dreams she never shared
    along a trail of mad delusions
    laid by souls in disrepair

    Scarce the light could penetrate
    its dense and musty crown
    Achlyssa Myst holds fast and tight
    to the dreams would drive her down

    Forest creatures – curious
    gather circles roundabout
    to gaze upon Achlyssa
    who's within and yet without

    Achlyssa hums a fretful tune
    while rocking to and fro
    and spills her blood to puddle
    in the cockled undergrow
    Last edited by MHenry; 07-05-2016, 02:20 PM. Reason: Tweaks on advice of counsel

  • #2
    Wow MH. This is poignant and quite amazing. Loved it!!

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Why thank you kind sir. :-). I'm glad not the last lines lol lol.

    • MHenry
      MHenry commented
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      not the naked part, either...

    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Lol lol. I almost spit out what I was drinking. You're too funny MH. no need to blush lol. :-)

  • #3
    this has left me green and pale wow maestro!

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    • MHenry
      MHenry commented
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      Thank you, lg. I think that is a very complimentary comment... or perhaps I just gave you the flu!?

  • #4
    Brilliant. Especially that last line. Gripping!

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    • MHenry
      MHenry commented
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      Thank you, Dwayne! I like the last line, too!

  • #5
    '..who's w/in and yet without...' favorite snippet of the entire piece. A bit enigmatic from your older rollicking fare MHenry. My comprehension beads need running if you continue in this vein.

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    • MHenry
      MHenry commented
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      Thank you, RLW! I like that line, too!
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