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This is like a haiku in sensibility, Merkavah. You have painted a picture with just the tiniest details of sight and sound that loom as large as if you had described an entire scene of horse and rider galloping in the wind. Very nicely done. -
Your words tell us, the tone deaf, what it is to be a musician. Thanks for this.Comment
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Oh dear, MHenry thinks this is about horses while John Wertz thinks this is about music? How can this be? Poetry is meant to be overt with only one meaning at all times!Comment
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I was getting he equestrian thing as well, just forgot to mention.Comment
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And therein Merkavah - lies one of the beauties of poetry. The both/and invitation of the verse! I'm not much of an equestrian, but love the feel (and sound) of this piece.Comment
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Top drawer stuff, Merkavah! I took it to be a bold conflation of playing a stringed instrument and horse riding, underscoring the exhilarating 'achieve of, the mastery of the thing'. Hat's off to your virtuosic steedsmanship.
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Stark imagery!
Well done!Comment
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Merkavah i read 'music' first ...until i read the comments! HA!
now i can see a horse race! I like it ! a lot!Comment
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