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    Green Eyes

    Your heart, a gateway to the galaxy
    One of the great wonders of the whole world
    Like the great pyramid's immortality
    Your tenderness, secret chambers unfurled

    The depth of your love is more expansive
    surpasses unknown celestial bodies
    Face seamless sweet enigmatic glances
    Radiant smile filling heavens with glory

    Yet that devilish twinkle in your green eyes
    Luminous like the Green Pea galaxy
    Can bring down the strongest man, make him cry
    writhe in agony, cause his fatality
    Last edited by AlexandratheLate; 07-02-2016, 05:31 AM.

  • #2
    And who is this green eyed goddess you speak of Sweet Pea?

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    • AlexandratheLate
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      Lol lol Bobby. My aunt - she has green eyes and red hair.

  • #3
    AG, has run into some awesome femme fatale lately! Nice write AG! Post a picture!

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    • AlexandratheLate
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      Had some of those in my family. lol. My aunt was quite a beauty like my mom.

  • #4
    green eyes and galaxy! out of this world!

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  • #5
    Thank you Grant.

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    • #6
      Thank you rhymetime.

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      • #7
        This is a theaphany. I recognize Her.
        Last edited by grant hayes; 07-02-2016, 02:52 PM.

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        • AlexandratheLate
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          Yes! Yes! You are exactly right - my aunt has red hair and green eyes and started the inspiration and she's sweet but I wanted to write about something more divine and with more power with a hint of wicked delight.

      • #8
        You paint femme fatale with beautiful brushstrokes, Alexandra.

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        • AlexandratheLate
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          Thank you for the like. :-)

      • #9
        Thank you very much John.

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        • #10
          Alluring write thank you

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          • AlexandratheLate
            AlexandratheLate commented
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            Thank you very Pp. I appreciate your comments.

        • #11
          Dangerous, erotic fervour!

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          • AlexandratheLate
            AlexandratheLate commented
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            Thank you very much Dwayne. :-)

        • #12
          Thank you for the like LD. :-)

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          • #13
            Thank you for the like TC. :-)

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            • #14
              Green eyes. you had me there. Lush imagery again well voiced in your celestial travels. I think the heavens are crowded with your poems.

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              • AlexandratheLate
                AlexandratheLate commented
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                Thank you Tanner -- seems like we're almost in sync writing about green eyes - me in July and you in August. I liked your take on chlorophyll - it was very descriptive and vivid.

            • #15
              I must have been off-line and on the road to have missed this green-eyed beauty of a poem Alex! Reading the comments, I'd say your aunt was a very special lady. I loved that you wanted to emphasize divinity in the 'Green Pea galaxy'. That line just makes me smile over and over.

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              • AlexandratheLate
                AlexandratheLate commented
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                Thank you very much RLW. I've always had a soft spot for green eyes and blue eyes. :-).
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