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  • Under a full moon

    Under a full moon

    Two lovers spoon

    Silent presume

    Each other consume

    Pleasure mutual assume

    Under a full moon




    Under a full moon

    Two lovers kiss

    Enjoy naked bliss

    Bodies reminsce

    Satisfied not dismiss

    Under a full moon




    Under a full moon

    Two lovers caress

    Bodies combine and bless

    Filled with love confess

    Unions climatic success

    Under a full moon




    Under a full moon

    Two lovers smile

    Just holding for awhile

    Embrace so tactile

    As one in profile

    Under a full moon

  • #2
    of course I love it!

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    • Madeline
      Madeline commented
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      Thank you Lunarglide

  • #3
    Madeline, this piece is almost haiku-like in its short staccato lines. It has potential also as a non-rhyming piece with longer lines and a melody. Then it could be a song! Well done!
    Last edited by MHenry; 07-02-2016, 12:30 PM.

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    • Madeline
      Madeline commented
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      Thank you for revealing possibilities that passed me by

  • #4
    There is a definite musicality to it. It brought ''Killing Moon'' by Echo and the Bunnymen to mind as I read it. Well done, Madeline!

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    • Madeline
      Madeline commented
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      Again thank you for opening my eyes

  • #5
    Nicely done,,,, i like this:

    As one in profile

    Under a full moon

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    • Madeline
      Madeline commented
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      thank you your enjoyment my reward

  • #6
    That is so much better than being a werewolf

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