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    Last edited by Bison; 12-10-2016, 06:44 PM.

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      I feel as though this verse deserves more than I can verbalize. I could use the word "pessimistic" but that would be dismissive. I never know when verses are personal or observational. Either way this verse touches my heart in a deep and personal place. You have captured and expressed that place perfectly. thank you.

      Two observations, that may be my error-
      V4L2- Living blue that "fade" to sickly green and "are"...
      Some punctuation throughout might help the flow.

      Again thank you for this powerful verse.

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        Thank you for the corrections. I am glad you identify with this.
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