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  • MHenry
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    That is a great summation of this piece, lg! It works perfectly.
    However, the intended meaning is a bit further from the surface, and it may just be too obscure. A fault of the author, but fully intended.

  • lunar glide
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    the inconsolable collector!

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  • MHenry
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    You are on the right track, lg!

  • lunar glide
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    my guess is the bubble gum souvenirs collected over repetitive patterns in decisions regarding perhaps unsatisfactory relationships?

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  • MHenry
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    Thank you all for reading! Because you took the time to read this, I will let you in on the secret. This isn't actually about baseball cards (or gum).
    I would interested to see if anyone can find the hidden meaning!

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  • lunar glide
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    do you still collect them? good sentiments about baseball

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  • rhymetime
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    Ah, baseball cards, the lottery tickets of our youth. Are they still sold and collected?

    I love your presentation and the last line brings it all together.

    thanks

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  • Bobby Del Boy
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    What no Rhyme? Love it MH!

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Nice one MH. I enjoyed the story.

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  • MHenry
    started a topic Baseball Cards

    Baseball Cards

    Baseball Cards

    I bought a pack
    Of baseball cards
    With bubble gum inside

    There were six cards
    Inside the pack
    Each card was different

    I wanted to collect
    All 300 cards, so
    I kept on buying packs

    But I kept getting
    The same cards
    Over and Over

    And the ones
    I really wanted
    Were so hard to find

    I stopped buying
    Baseball cards
    But I have lots of gum!
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