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  • Yesterday's Coat

    Wrapped in yesterdays coat
    permeated with the stench of someone else’s life,
    he sleeps.
    It was free.
    It is warm.
    He dreams.
    Dreams of a coat
    that smells only of him.



  • #2
    Wow! Someone save this poor man's soul. Bring him back to yesterday. Awesome write rhymetime!

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    • #3
      Oh wow - what a heart touching poem. Deep write, truly fabulous.

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      • #4
        This is touching and topical rt! Well done!

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        • #5
          Nicely done.

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          • #6
            My sincere thanks to all who took the time to read and comment on this verse.

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            • #7
              This is great very evocative I can almost smell the coat thank you

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              • #8
                Yesterday's Coat, I love it! Can be so many things, your verse is very thought provoking

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