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  • Morning Rises

    Morning Rises

    waking to you watching the view
    through sheer draped window frames

    sweet silhouette – comfort of nights and days and ages passed
    tucked together, we spooned, crooned, swam lovely rivers of sweet delight

    I wonder at your pensive gaze on fields new fallowed
    you sense my stare
    turn back to bed

    shivers pass automatic
    length of frame extending
    open arms speak longing deeper than primal cores recall

    let me love you
    let me love you

    let me
    love you

    forever



    ©RhymeLovingWriter

  • #2
    This is romantically, eloquent.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you Dwayne. MHenry calls me a hopeless romantic. I think he's right. It shows up all over the place in my writing.

  • #3
    This is very romantic. Many likes!!

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thanks Alex. Perhaps your style is rubbing off on me?

  • #4
    If something oinks, rolls around in the mud, has a curly tail, and their flesh tastes like bacon, I call it a pig. If someone writes the way you do, I call that a romantic! But nobody does it better! Nice write, RLW!

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thanks MHenry. There are much worse things I could be I guess!
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