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    Penetration

    he tasted of garlic and sweet red wine
    soju and ginseng candy after that stint in Korea
    beer, chips and salsa at home

    when love blossoms
    there seems never enough time to
    fully imbibe
    other

    no matter how intoxicating



    ©RhymeLovingWriter 2016
    Last edited by RhymeLovingWriter; 06-28-2016, 05:10 PM.

  • #2
    RLW - OMG, I'll never think of this "P" word the same. Your imagery has stained it forever.

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  • #3
    This is powerful lovestuff, Rhymist; I really enjoy the relaxed, open, spare style of it. Top drawer.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you Grant. Since wordiness is my usual stock in trade, it's nice to do something a bit different.
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