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    I walked through the threshold of no return.
    In that place, sanity became obsolete.
    I walked the path and hardly discerned
    The theatrical web's pantomime's deceit.

    I felt angsts in chaos like blooming Devil's urn
    Saprobic in nature, his collection was complete.
    Sucked the life out of me as we adjourned.
    Touching tale of us...bittersweet...

    With folded knees...for forgiveness at my feet.
    Alas, my heart...void and bears no heat.


    20160627

  • #2
    This makes me want to cry. Your words have power to draw emotion imrogue.

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thanks for reading, liking and commenting RLW! I thought maybe a little harsh?

    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      No - real life can be harsh. It is always good to write to truth.

  • #3
    Go with the 'harsh' imrogue.

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      harsh it is... thank you, Grant!

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    Thanks for liking Muttado1sb!

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    • #5
      Yes, as I chastened some poor, wretched, unsuspecting soul to embrace the dark in the name of poesy, so I echo grant Sensei's admonition to embrace the harsh! Harsh darkness is the stuff of...harsh darkness, I think. Well done, imrogue! There is power in the darkness and the harsh, as the devil would tell you.

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      • grant hayes
        grant hayes commented
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        'Harsh darkness is the stuff of...harsh darkness, I think.'

        HAhahahahahahahahahaha that is the best laugh I've had all week! Thank you for that pearl, Maestro

      • imrogue
        imrogue commented
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        Thank you MHenry! May the power of light overcome someday...it gets creepy in the dark....lol
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