Adjourned

[imrogue]

I walked through the threshold of no return.
In that place, sanity became obsolete.
I walked the path and hardly discerned
The theatrical web's pantomime's deceit.

I felt angsts in chaos like blooming Devil's urn
Saprobic in nature, his collection was complete.
Sucked the life out of me as we adjourned.
Touching tale of us...bittersweet...

With folded knees...for forgiveness at my feet.
Alas, my heart...void and bears no heat.


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[RhymeLovingWriter]

This makes me want to cry. Your words have power to draw emotion imrogue.

[imrogue]

Thanks for reading, liking and commenting RLW! I thought maybe a little harsh?

[RhymeLovingWriter]

No - real life can be harsh. It is always good to write to truth.

[grant hayes]

Go with the 'harsh' imrogue.

[imrogue]

harsh it is... thank you, Grant!

[imrogue]

Thanks for liking Muttado1sb!

[MHenry]

Yes, as I chastened some poor, wretched, unsuspecting soul to embrace the dark in the name of poesy, so I echo grant Sensei's admonition to embrace the harsh! Harsh darkness is the stuff of...harsh darkness, I think. Well done, imrogue! There is power in the darkness and the harsh, as the devil would tell you.

[grant hayes]

'Harsh darkness is the stuff of...harsh darkness, I think.'

HAhahahahahahahahahaha that is the best laugh I've had all week! Thank you for that pearl, Maestro

[imrogue]

Thank you MHenry! May the power of light overcome someday...it gets creepy in the dark....lol