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  • Your Time to Shine

    {So today I wrote a song for the first time. I wanted to have opinions on the lyrics...}


    Verse 1:

    They say you can't be anything
    But you can be everything
    Cause you are stronger than the storm, yeah you are stronger than the storm
    They say your dreams impossible
    But you should know you are unstoppable
    reach for the sky

    Verse 2:

    you wait, for something good
    you wait longer than you should
    you can make it happen, Yeah, you can make it happen
    Your happiness relies on you
    you just keep on pushing through
    Now know that you can make it



    Chorus:

    follow your dream, no matter how hard it seems
    The whole world is yours, There's many open doors
    do what u want, dont wait for them
    cause it is your time to shine


    Bridge:

    Stop waiting for everyone,
    Its you that matters,
    Go before your heart shatters
    Cause they will break you
    Til you're gone



  • #2
    Sounds very nice PoetryBree. I'd love to hear the melody to accompany it if you find a way to do that!

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    • #3
      Lovely, Poetry Bree! I wish I could evaluate words suitable for song, but I am a zero on that score!

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      • #4
        Beautiful!

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        • #5
          Great job PoetryBree.

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