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    Packaging

    extraneous wrapping
    employed with purest motive
    preservation…portability…price

    reasoning stands understood

    desire rises
    eschewing artificial artifice

    reality rendered

    dénouement be damned

  • #2
    Fun write!

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  • #3
    You're actually a world famous published poet just lurking impishly behind RhymeLovingWriter, aren't you. You adopt the voice and posture of a tentative learner, then TADAAA, out comes another effortlessly turned and tuned masterpiece. Sheesh!

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      That too rings true.

    • MHenry
      MHenry commented
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      RLW, before I comment on your poem, please note that you have the last line of a ha'sonnet in your comment to grant. Now, you just need the first six lines!

      That too rings true.

    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Ha! I'd not even noticed. And I was going to quit and go to bed, but now...how can I w/out taking a stab at it???

  • #4
    Powerful statement on the state of things, RLW. Ah, for the simpler life of the farmer and fisher!

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Yes, the kinder we can be to mother earth, the longer she will favor us with her plenty.
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