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    SPRING HINGE BACK DOOR

    Spring hinged, loosened to ages Tempted
    Latch conceit to season’s stages
    Mortise guided screws
    Heads be faded
    Green against white
    Sun and light
    Dark and night
    Lose a door that once was tight
    Panes a wipe, needed cleared
    To the back I can see from here
    A step within
    A step on out
    This mortise guided plank, swings about
    My house it gives
    My home a mouth
    And it shall speak longer and louder than I
    Remaining to swing
    When I chose to fly
    Comes with sadness, on final shut
    Closing scene
    The great directors cut
    Another life will come with key
    An anxious glee
    Hopefully
    Turn the knob
    Set me free
    Open the back door
    To finally see
    You, come
    Me, leave

    RDS
    THE SECOND

  • #2
    The cyclical nature of this is magical - and hopeful. Nice work TS!

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    • #3
      A bit of Oliver Wendell Holmes in the treatment of the door. Nostalgia chokes me with this one! Well done, The second!

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      • #4
        Very well done The second. Really enjoyed the tempo and nostalgia.

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        • #5
          The rhythm is musical very well done!

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          • #6
            This mortise guided plank, swings about
            My house it gives
            My home a mouth
            And it shall speak longer and louder than I


            Ah, awesomely worded, the second-to-none. Not enough Likes.

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            • #7
              The second first this was an incredible write! (the) second, what a clever title and vehicle for this journey.
              third, thank you for teaching me a new word! 'Mortise'

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              • #8
                Thank you grant!!! I am literally dying to write and as i move forward please forgive my emphasis on doors and this side and that side

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                • grant hayes
                  grant hayes commented
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                  Mate, if you need to write about doors, write about them. You sure know how.

              • #9
                Sobbing, i thank you all

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                • #10
                  This is wonderful!

                  A turned key, with every turn of phrase!

                  Deep write!

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                  • #11
                    A late Thanks

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