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    A Letter (To Whom...)

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    Last edited by Merkavah; 03-28-2021, 02:06 AM.
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    The journey from lush opening to stark, hopeless conclusion happens rather abruptly Merkavah! I sense real frustration in this verse!

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    • #3
      It starts off like the Beach Boys California Saga: Big Sur! One of my favorite songs.
      Beach Boys - California Saga: Big Sur
      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KASDsSaJy64
      Holland is the sole 1973 studio release by The Beach Boys, their nineteenth studio album. It was famously (and expensively) recorded in Baambrugge, Netherlan...


      Then, you make a transition with Austria, to let us down a little easier when the last stanza hits us with biting sarcasm!

      At least, this is how I read it.

      In any case, I like it, Merkavah!

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      • #4
        I tried so hard for humor (albeit geographical humor) on this one!

        Hint - There are some errant 'letters'.
        Last edited by Merkavah; 06-26-2016, 05:37 AM.

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