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    Lovers in Space

    If lovers could live forever in the celestial galaxy
    Our bodies meld and blend with all the rays of color
    I would revel--luxuriate in the hopes of this apogee
    As all the planets and sparkling stars dance and flutter


    Like colors in a prism, the light would blend and gently shimmer
    Across your heavenly body glistening with sprays of color
    I’d drown in your eyes where all the brilliant stars reside and glimmer
    Merge, become one with you in such a way yet to be discovered

    I’d lay the moon at your feet, wrap the planets around your body
    there would be no limits or boundaries in this heavenly dwelling
    a place where lust, and love by spatial ruptures are wholly embodied
    with fearful insecurities, all inhibitions, repelling

  • #2
    This is lovely to imagine AtL! You paint beautiful images with the choicest of phrasing and words! Kudos!

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you very much RLW. This was challenging with the amount of syllables.

  • #3
    You have just described the heaven you deserve to abide in forever, Alexandra.

    You've held together the rhythm over quite long lines. I salute!

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      That is so sweet Grant. Thank you very much for both compliments.

  • #4
    this poem! you have arranged word gems of true love only as a poet artist jeweler can.

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you very much lunar glide - you know I love the moon and the heavens. :-)

  • #5
    Thank you for the like. :-)

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    • #6
      Thank you for the like AD. :-)

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      • #7
        Like grant Sensei says, the rhythm is consistently good over the entire poem, and you have made a good case for leaving the planet and making a beeline for the stars! Lovely write, AG!

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      • #8
        marvelous journey AlexandratheLate I really loved reading and i could see 'colors in a prism, the light would blend and gently shimmer
        Across your heavenly body glistening with sprays of color '
        Lovely!!

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        • #9
          Thank you very much Suz-zen.

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          • #10
            A galactic, romantic masterpiece! Beautiful Alexandra!

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            • #11
              Thank you very much Bobby. :-)

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              • #12
                You literally, embody passion and romance.

                You convey it THAT WELL!!

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                • AlexandratheLate
                  AlexandratheLate commented
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                  Thank you very much Dwayne. :-).

              • #13
                Thank you. :-)

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