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  • Is There Any Safety

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    Last edited by Bison; 12-10-2016, 07:35 PM.

  • #2
    Seems like a modern day psalm of personal angst. It's a dire, relentless self-diagnosis indeed, all the more affecting for its clear diction.

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    • #3
      Oh wow - painful write. I can hear the despair in every word. Wonderfully written.

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      • #4
        Well written Bison all of it... really liked:

        My eyes seem blinded
        By lights I never turned on

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        • #5
          This seems a religious and lovelorn poem, Bison, but I can't be sure. I am buffaloed by the ambiguity. Powerful words, my poet friend!

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          • Bison
            Bison commented
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            Ambiguity allows for personal interpretation. We construct our own meanings. Thank you, sir.

        • #6
          Is there any safety, indeed.

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          • #7
            Did you mean to make me FRANTIC with this? If so you succeed. If not you succeed anyway

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            • Bison
              Bison commented
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              My intention was not to make anyone frantic. At least I do not believe it was. Perhaps.
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