A Candle (haiku)

[Bison]

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[MHenry]

An interesting haiku, bison. Vigil for a bloody death?

[Bison]

No, sir. Just an observation of a candle and it's life.

[DWAYNE]

Creative!

[Suz-zen]

Bison as I watch a candle burn here at my desk i love reading this!!

[Sumyanna]

Wonderful. Love watching candles burn.

[RhymeLovingWriter]

I love how you used the candle dripping as weeping - it really seems tear shaped. Very nice observations here!

[grant hayes]

I typically don't go in for multisyllabic words in poems. But the word 'incandescent' is an exception. And here it is, adverbialised to five syllables. It has such a remarkable sound and rhythm, that word, and casts so many ripples.

And the haiku in which you have set it is lovely.