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    Rewind! rewind! rewind!
    Screaming thoughts out of my mind.
    They are stuck in a vise.
    Rather than paying a price...
    Start from scratch...
    Continue to watch...
    When you open your lips,
    Use cautions and grips.
    Speak with kindness...
    Fill your heart with gladness!
    Detach yourself from madness..
    Keeping life from sadness.
    Rewind! rewind! rewind!
    Screaming thoughts out of my mind.
    Leave negative vibes
    Somewhere far, far behind.


  • #2
    OK, I'm all in! Seperating ourselves from the insanity sounds like a plan to me. And a good one. Nice write, imrogue.

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    • imrogue
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      Thanks you! 😊

  • #3
    Hi, imrogue,

    A poem written from passion about controlling our own thoughts. Easier than controlling other's thoughts, but still a challenge!
    Writing from passion is a good way to write!

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    • imrogue
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      Thanks for reading and for your comments MH!

  • #4
    I am in agreement with you. Love this write!

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thank you Sumyanna! I'm glad you enjoyed it! 😊

  • #5
    Imrogue, Vivid, vivid, vivid! Tightly written. lovely. No excess baggage here!

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    • imrogue
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      Your comments are very much appreciated! Thanks for reading 😊

  • #6
    Great job imrogue. I could feel the spiraling in out of control.

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    • imrogue
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      Thanks AtL! It does have the tug and pull effect...lol
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