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    I gave you the chance
    but you didn't take it
    so I did
    and now I dance
    with abandon
    across the field
    not caring who sees.
    It's only me.

    And the day is bright
    and the temperature right
    and the rhythm flows free
    as I dance
    to my own melody
    while you watch
    ruefully.

    But dance was not your thing
    and you couldn't fake it
    like I did
    but you can sing
    and your voice rises up
    across the field
    not caring who hears
    you've no fears.

    And the day is bright
    and the temperature right
    and the rhythm flows free
    as I dance
    to your melody
    while you sing
    joyfully.

  • #2
    I get the image of birds or a music box with a twirling, dancing porcelain figure on top. Well written and enjoyable, Muttado1sb!

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thank you, MH. It was a fun little write.

  • #3
    i can imagine myself going and dancing in the middle of the field. Probably because I burst into dancing at the most random times...Anyways, This was a joy to read! It was very well written!

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thank you, PoetryBree. I don't dance, because it isn't my thing, but then again, neither is singing. But it played well in my head as it came out.

  • #4
    I see Julie Andrews and The Sound of Music. Fancy that whimsical write of yours!

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thank you, Bobby. I had a similar vision when I read it after I wrote it.

  • #5
    Dancing in a field is a lovely image 😃

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    • Muttado1sb
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      Thank you, lunar. It is.

  • #6
    Okay, hands down this is one of my favorites right now. Such soul - I love it. Your words took me there and I loved every minute of it.

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thank you very much, Sumyanna!
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