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imrogue

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Beautiful Voice (Ha'Sonnet Chime In #2)

05-31-2016, 10:45 PM

Lost in my deep,
sweet reverie,
beautiful voice
heard in a song...
accompanied
glorious chants
in grave silence!

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Last edited by imrogue; 05-31-2016, 11:09 PM. Reason: I forgot the twist 😁
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grant hayes

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06-01-2016, 12:26 AM

I cannot speak for the ha'sonnet doyens here, but I find this very skilfully done, imrogue.
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imrogue commented

06-01-2016, 01:00 PM

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thank you for reading and for your very nice comments! I really appreciate them! 😊
AlexandratheLate

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06-01-2016, 03:00 AM

Very well done imrogue and your words evoke a lot of feelings and images.
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imrogue commented

06-01-2016, 01:02 PM

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Thank you for reading and for your very nice comments! 😊
Muttado1sb

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Nothing to see here
Just a spiller of blather
Quite common, really
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06-01-2016, 04:39 AM

Very well done, imrogue!
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imrogue commented

06-01-2016, 01:02 PM

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Thank you for reading and for your kind words! 😊
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06-01-2016, 07:54 AM

imrogue Well done!!

accompanied
glorious chants
in grave silence!

Marvelous!!
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imrogue commented

06-01-2016, 01:06 PM

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Thank you for reading Suz-zen! I'm glad you enjoyed it! thanks for wonderful comment!
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06-01-2016, 02:06 PM

Well done.

In any format!
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06-02-2016, 10:30 PM

Hi, imrogue, This is a free-verse, enchanting ha'sonnet that sings harmoniously in grave and silent reverie! Two, four-syllable thumbs up!
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imrogue commented

06-03-2016, 01:34 AM

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😊Thank you for reading and for the thumbs up MH!
John Wertz

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06-03-2016, 04:52 AM

I thought of three different ways of reading your beautiful words -- each interesting

Last edited by John Wertz; 06-03-2016, 07:33 AM.
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06-03-2016, 06:49 AM

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Thank you John in three different ways! 😉😊

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