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    Lost in my deep,
    sweet reverie,
    beautiful voice
    heard in a song...
    accompanied
    glorious chants
    in grave silence!





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    Last edited by imrogue; 06-01-2016, 12:09 AM. Reason: I forgot the twist 😁

  • #2
    I cannot speak for the ha'sonnet doyens here, but I find this very skilfully done, imrogue.

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      thank you for reading and for your very nice comments! I really appreciate them! 😊

  • #3
    Very well done imrogue and your words evoke a lot of feelings and images.

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thank you for reading and for your very nice comments! 😊

  • #4
    Very well done, imrogue!

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thank you for reading and for your kind words! 😊

  • #5
    imrogue Well done!!

    accompanied
    glorious chants
    in grave silence!


    Marvelous!!

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thank you for reading Suz-zen! I'm glad you enjoyed it! thanks for wonderful comment!

  • #6
    Well done.

    In any format!

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    • #7
      Hi, imrogue, This is a free-verse, enchanting ha'sonnet that sings harmoniously in grave and silent reverie! Two, four-syllable thumbs up!

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      • imrogue
        imrogue commented
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        😊Thank you for reading and for the thumbs up MH!

    • #8
      I thought of three different ways of reading your beautiful words -- each interesting
      Last edited by John Wertz; 06-03-2016, 08:33 AM.

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      • imrogue
        imrogue commented
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        Thank you John in three different ways! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š
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