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    MHenry
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  • MHenry
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    Thanks for reading and commenting, imrogue.
    The horrible truths out there...

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  • imrogue
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    This is an alarming write... My 21 y/o daughter (17 at that time) shared a story
    about a girl from her school who had a reputation like mentioned here.
    Although a hearsay...I wondered if there was any truth in it.
    ...Thanks for sharing

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  • MHenry
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  • MHenry
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    So, it is safe to turn the other cheek, too!
  • lunar glide
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    not even with a peashooter lol

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  • MHenry
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  • MHenry
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    Thank you, lunar glide! That is a very nice comment. And, if you are disarmed, you can't shoot me!
  • lunar glide
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  • lunar glide
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    I enjoy how you deal with strong subjects so directly and you disarm me with wit. 😄

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  • MHenry
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    Thanks for looking, Dwayne!
  • MHenry
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  • MHenry
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    Thanks, BDB, your comments are always very supportive!
  • MHenry
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  • MHenry
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    This has to be one of the toughest beats for a cop! Especially, if they have young rebellious daughters of their own! Thanks for the look, John!
  • Bobby Del Boy
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  • Bobby Del Boy
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    Roxanne, you don't have to turn on the red light. This write Stings and cuts like a knife.Well done MH.

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  • John Wertz
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    Hi MHenry. Powerful and true.. In my former life, don't know if I told you, I was a cop in a northeast city. I worked some vice on occasion and always found it depressing. This poem made me think of a particular prostitute who wound up a murder victim.

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  • DWAYNE
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    Wo.

    This cuts!

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  • grant hayes
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    As long as it works for the ear, I am all for breaking patterns. And this works for the ear.
  • MHenry
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  • MHenry
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    Thank you, AG! It is heartening to know you are reading my work and find favor.
  • MHenry
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  • MHenry
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    Hi, grant, I was thinking about the fourplay, even toying with threeplay, but I have decided to play fast and loose with syllables if it suits my purpose and flows properly. I grow weary of counting knuckles and changing words to fit a form.
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