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  • MHenry
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    Thank you, graydon! I appreciate you taking the time to look and comment.

  • AlexandratheLate
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    Such a strong topic said in such few words. Well done MH.

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  • grant hayes
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    The spare lines are the ideal vehicle for this grim vignette, MHenry. I thought it was going to be four syllables in every line, but saw just one exception. Not that it matters; the rhyme and meter flow just right.

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  • graydon archer
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    Indeed a poignant writing about an all to real topic. Well done maestro...

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  • MHenry
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    Young and Pretty

    Young and Pretty

    Young and pretty
    Down shadowed streets
    Of a cruel city
    Where strangers meet

    A knowing glance
    And forty bucks
    A quick romance
    In a pickup truck

    If she's done well
    She'll get some smack
    A spot in Hell
    With no way back

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