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    Kill or Be Killed

    Insincere your feigned surprise
    Prefigured - by black magic charred
    You plot my over soon demise
    With your disfigured disregard

    Albeit, your wily words belie
    The bitterness your lips impart
    Reflected in your eyes I spy
    Wilderness of a callous heart

    The trail of clotted blood you spilled
    Within my dagger-speckled breast
    Encrusted with the poison pills
    Of a disquieted unrest

    Shall I stab you in your fitful sleep?
    Or strangle you in devil’s keep?
    Last edited by MHenry; 05-28-2016, 01:02 AM.

  • #2
    Very vivid language brings this to life for me thank you

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    • MHenry
      MHenry commented
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      Thanks for looking Pp

  • #3
    Quite wonderful MH. Very vivid, wonderful imagery!! Love the use of 8 syllables.

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    • MHenry
      MHenry commented
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      Thanks, AG!

  • #4
    Another sonnet inspired form. Interesting imagery, ''dagger-speckled breast'' standing out to me. Very good, MH.

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    • MHenry
      MHenry commented
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      Thanks, Muttado1sb!
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