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    Answer (Reverso nonet)

    answer
    for sweet
    sad solitary soul
    brought last refuge – forming
    the brave new world – spinning
    outside bounds of all known universe,
    bringing comfort set for new and glorious
    possibility. Defining all once questioned among noble men,
    tumbling hapless into void beyond void into hapless, tumbling –
    possibility. Defining all once questioned among noble men,
    bringing comfort set for new and glorious
    outside bounds of all known universe,
    the brave new world – spinning
    brought last refuge – forming
    sad solitary soul
    for sweet
    answer
    Last edited by RhymeLovingWriter; 05-27-2016, 07:58 PM.

  • #2
    Thanks for the like writersprocrastination! This one gave my brain a workout!

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    • #3
      Outstanding RLW!! Just a wonderful job!

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    • #4
      Thanks for the like Suz-zen.

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      • #5
        Excellent, RLW! Another new poetic form? The Reverso Nonet?

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        • RhymeLovingWriter
          RhymeLovingWriter commented
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          Well, I don't see this one catching on anytime soon - it was a bear to configure!

      • #6
        Very good, and quite a challenge. You made it work.

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      • #7
        Is there any form she cannot master and turn to gold?

        No, there is none.

        The process it tells is august and intriguing, this mirrored masterpiece.

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        • RhymeLovingWriter
          RhymeLovingWriter commented
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          Thanks Grant. I don't know how 'golden' this is, but I do know it took some work.

      • #8
        Wow! Great job! Seems like quite the challenge!

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      • #9
        LOL! I was just looking for another poem I'd done and see that I (quite incorrectly) labelled this a reverso nonet. I originally though you needed to add an entire WORD to each succeeding line, not an additional syllable. No wonder MHenry asked me if I was inventing a new form. I needed this laugh at myself!

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        • MHenry
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          You can laugh at me, too, RLW! My first non-nonet was a word count, not a syllable count! grant, Sensei, pointed that out to me, as I sheepishly headed for the pasture.

        • RhymeLovingWriter
          RhymeLovingWriter commented
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          Baaa...I didn't know that - but see I am in good company then!

      • #10
        Still wonderful RLW!!

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        • RhymeLovingWriter
          RhymeLovingWriter commented
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          Thanks AtL - this is a very forgiving and encouraging group.
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