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    The delicate shroud of morning mist,
    Hiding beauty as it drifts
    Its grey is still one of lifes colours
    Although not listed in natures wonders

    The dampness in air the refreshes
    The brightness of headlights its represses
    Night is over the day reborn
    Sun rises heralding dawn

    Its fifty shades of grey
    Clears revealing a spring day
    Leaving the Cornish Countryside on display
    Lifts spirits with gorses yellow array





  • #2
    This is much more melodic than your usual style. It really flows nicely Parkinsonspoet.

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    • #3
      I hope one day to see that Cornish grey and gorse, poet.

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      • #4
        Very good rhyme scheme Pp. Nice job!!

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        • #5
          Very nice, Parkinsonpoet. Beautiful description of the morning's mist rising. As AtL said, very good rhyming scheme.

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          • #6
            Ah, the musing Pp!

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