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    And no one died
    That's a relief
    the sergeant sighed
    I'll tell the chief
    It was just fun
    Kids with squirt guns
    All splash, no clash

  • #2
    Hahahahahahaha nice one, Muttado.

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    • #3
      Thanks, grant. The first line came out of a comment I wrote to MHenry's reverse nonet, and then I remembered the recent news story from Toronto where the police were called out to what was a bunch of girls playing assassins in squirt gun fight. This four syllable form has just taken over my creative process.

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      • #4
        I think it was made for you ☺

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        • RhymeLovingWriter
          RhymeLovingWriter commented
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          I'm thinking I agree!

        • Muttado1sb
          Muttado1sb commented
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          Thank you. But eventually it will move on. It just doesn't appear that it will be any time soon.

      • #5
        Wow - love this!

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        • Muttado1sb
          Muttado1sb commented
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          Well, thank you, Sumyanna.

      • #6
        Hi, Muttado1sb, This one is very clever and flows smoothly. It also has the rhythm of police talk, which is very cool!
        You are a veritable fount of Ha'Sonnets!
        Not that you need to, but feel free to experiment with free verse and take other liberties with the form to give yourself a larger palette.
        I sent you an invite just a little bit ago.

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