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  • Light Change

    The light turns green
    The car horns blare
    Causing a scene
    But you don't care
    The text you got
    Was just too hot
    Reply or die

  • #2
    Haha! Very good Muttado1sb. This is a superb example of the form!

    Rhyme scheme: a b a b c c dd
    Meter: Flowing
    Turn: Clever and universal
    Resolution: The stakes are high

    10 of 10!

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thank you again, MHenry. I am enjoying reading all the other posts as well as this format tends toward the lighter side.

  • #3
    MHenry, the Zone is breaking out with this form. I love how folks are taking to it. Muttado: another adept.

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Simple, playful, light, what isn't to like? Thanks grant.

    • grant hayes
      grant hayes commented
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      It has to be new, MHenry. I can't think of ever coming across anything like this before.

    • Suz-zen
      Suz-zen commented
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      I have been looking... can't find it either!

  • #4
    Muttado1sb great poem!! enjoyed the rhyme,,,

    bra vis i MO!!

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thank you, Suz-zen. Based on being one of the horn blowers.

    • Suz-zen
      Suz-zen commented
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      YES!! Brilliant! Love it!

  • #5
    Wonderful wonderful !!! Love it!!!

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thank you, AtL.
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