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  • Here Comes the Judge

    Channeling MHenry here:

    Robed in deep black
    Chamber settled
    Brooking no slack
    Wisdom nettled
    Lost decorum
    Post coitus thrum
    Light me up, please

    I do wish it sounded more metrically balanced. Any suggestions?

  • #2
    Oh yes, very Henrician!

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    • #3
      I am not sure how or why I would change anything, RLW! You have channeled the Henrician turn and his sensibility in a Monty Python instilled hall of justice, aptly converted to a house of ill-repute - high heels pointed at the ceiling and harried butts pumping three Hail Mary's!

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      • #4
        Sounds good to me, RLW.

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        • #5
          I think it's perfect!

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