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  • Raoul D'Harmental
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    Hi Suz-zen. I am honoured by your huge compliment. Thankfully, this tells of a time which belongs to my past so I am long done mourning now!

  • Raoul D'Harmental
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    Aha, it's those visual images which helped me pen this!

  • Raoul D'Harmental
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    Thanks imrogue!

  • Suz-zen
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    Raoul D'Harmental your title of course was a hook for me... then as i began to read i could see the torment! when I read poetry i hear a voice after the first few lines... ... here was Errol Flynn standing tall... in the end... weeping.

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  • MHenry
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    How many times have I seen someone wrest an arrow from their chest in the movies? Yet ne'er have I seen it poem!
    Well done Raoul!

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  • imrogue
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    Deep emotional write! i like it!

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  • Raoul D'Harmental
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    Thanks RLW!

  • Raoul D'Harmental
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    Thanks lunar guide

  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Well this is a soulful write - I feel a need to mourn alongside - effective verse Raoul!

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  • lunar glide
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    the depth of feeling is conveyed.

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  • Raoul D'Harmental
    started a topic Love Unrequited

    Love Unrequited

    In anguish, my hands wrap around the shaft
    Of the arrow lodged deep within my heart.
    I wrest, wrench and wring it until the draft
    Gives way and frees my bosom of the dart.
    Free too is the red tide which now flows aft
    From the wound and with it my dreams depart.
    By storms scattered and hither-thither borne-
    I ache, dear Reader, I beg leave to mourn.
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