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WOW!
I'm either really wrong OR?
This is an AMAZING & FANTASTIC TRIBUTE & REFLECTION OF?
The Voice of the Silence by H. P. Blavatsky
I don't gamble much...
but i think my conclusion are correct?
either way it's 50/50
FANTASTIC!
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All I could think of was 'May the odds be ever in your favor' - watching too much Hunger Games....Comment
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Love the heads and tails and where you took this.Comment
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Of course, one can always say 'Let's flip a coin.' But why say in four words what can be said in forty ☺Comment
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When the forty words are worthy of their own silver coin, then bring them on, I say!
'A pint for me and a pint for my friend here!
This silver coin is recompense enough for the two pints and a score more!'
Well done, Sir grant! Spare but pregnant at one and the same time.
Many likes for this one!Last edited by MHenry; 05-21-2016, 09:41 PM.Comment
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Ah, yes, a pint would be nice. Many thanks, Maestro. Your comment rings with Bardic verve!Comment
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Grant you say why use four words when 40 will do so I look forward to the epic that you write about rolling the dice. On a slightly more serious note you have a gift for seeing beauty in the simplest of things. Thank you for sharingComment
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Now there's an idea: roll of the dice epic. I like it!
That is very gracious of you, Parkinsonspoet. Thank you. I think part of the remit of poetry is to find the complexity in simple things and to simplify complexities. Both are in evidence here on the Zone.Comment
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So if I find the complexities in a simple thing and then use poetryto simplify them am I not back to:-
A shape
A plane shape
A shape with symmetry
A shape with sides
A shape where equality is manadatory for shape sides
A shape where the sides must be more than three
A shape where the sides must be less than 5
A shape where angles must be right and equally
numerous as the side
This shape should be numbered but not a
round number not a multiple of two but a singular number
A shape number 1
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The scenic route definitely .Please forgive the cheekyness I couldn't resistComment
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I think we are ridding in the same caravan here- footsteps apart but heading in the same direction. Good!!Comment
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esoteric, enigmatic,haunting !
at first i thought ... Julius Caesar...the die is cast!...then my mind jumped to the 7 chakras of the the Divine, then when reading the lunge of a lion and in the next line the piebald world, you had me upside down grant hayes !Nicely done in a compact 6 lines....
Reading the other comments now, as usual, my thoughts are a bit different and then one and the same!Comment
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So beautifully described...Comment
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