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    she came as a breath of fresh air
    as beautiful as
    morning glory embraced by dew bathing
    epiphanic under the yawning sun
    gentle as a breeze
    her softness
    my hallucinogen I
    melt in her arms
    continuously
    I am in awe of
    her beauty
    breathtaking
    delicate
    feminine
    black
    beautiful melanin
    I fell into her spell
    with alacrity
    coffee black no
    sugar no cream
    my Queen
    envied and persecuted
    her essence
    the epitome of strength
    like coffee black no
    sugar no cream
    my Queen

    http://teespring.com/be-beautiful
    Last edited by Odonko-ba; 05-25-2016, 03:55 PM.

  • #2
    Whoa! I'll have the decaf please! Too much of a good thing might kill me.

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    • Odonko-ba
      Odonko-ba commented
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      Lol. Thanks for stopping by my friend and having a cup.

    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      chuckled with your comment

  • #3
    Yikes! You grabbed me with the title. then I drowned in your delicious brew!

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    • Odonko-ba
      Odonko-ba commented
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      Thank you my friend.

  • #4
    Beautiful lady - beautiful words - someone is definitely smitten!

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    • Odonko-ba
      Odonko-ba commented
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      Yes it is I my friend I confess. Lol. Thank you.

  • #5
    Great write, O-b! I think I'd like my coffee black, too! This vision of poetic beauty, the poem and the picture, is just the thing for a morning pick me up!

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    • Odonko-ba
      Odonko-ba commented
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      Yes. One coffee black coming up. Thank you my friend.

  • #6
    Oh wow. First of all... Your poem stands on its own two feet beautifully written... Hands down. That said wow 😲 she is a beauty! The image adds a lot as well to the poem. Gorgeous image and gorgeous lines. Love this

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    • Odonko-ba
      Odonko-ba commented
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      Thank you. I will be the first to admit she is stunning. Her name unknown. Saw this picture on Facebook and found myself in awe. And started writing. I can only wish to be so lucky.

  • #7
    Envied and persecuted did not go unnoticed. Only makes her more beautiful and the write more powerful

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    • Sumyanna
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      So true - I feel that this is where she has found her strength, but that could be me. To stand strong against the tide is not easy.

    • Odonko-ba
      Odonko-ba commented
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      Thank you my friend

    • Odonko-ba
      Odonko-ba commented
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      Yes sumyanna that is true. Strength comes from endurance.

  • #8
    Your poem is beautiful as are the hallucinations we many times eagerly embrace. She is absolutely gorgeous. :-).

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    • Odonko-ba
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      Thank you poetess

  • #9
    Exquisitely expressed thoughts on a beautiful subject. Well done my poet friend!

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    • #10
      Thank you my friend

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      • #11
        very nice poem and subject... gorgeous skin! cofee black with sugar... cream on the side later? lol

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        • #12
          As you wish my friend. :-) Thank you much.

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          • #13
            You have expressed your sheer delight in her beauty with such open-hearted authenticity and ardour, Odonko-ba. Your words leap with joy, and the joy is catching ☺

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            • #14
              Thank you my poet friend.

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