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  • A Boomerang Blast!

    Shapes)

    Shapes are but points,
    connected by lines,
    bundled in being,
    covered by drapes

    Space)
    Space is but being,
    squeezing out points,
    breaking down lines
    all over the place

    Time)
    Time is a construct
    measured and metered,
    strictly defined,
    kind of like rhyme

    Glory)
    Glory regales with
    wondrous sights
    of celestial heights
    and ancestral story

    Pity)
    Pity plays all who
    commiserate
    instead of abate
    while thinking self witty

    Sorrow)
    Sorrow - emotion
    wrung out like rag
    and rather a drag
    when greeting the morrow

    Laughter)
    Laughter a liniment,
    balm for the soul
    making one whole
    peal from heart's rafter

    Virtue)
    Virtue builds honor,
    honor holds value,
    value breeds cover,
    worthy to pursue





  • #2
    You have embraced the Boomerang and wear it like a pearl necklace! Have you no end of talent?!

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      You are so sweetly kind to say so MHenry. I like your comment - pearl necklace - beautiful thought!

  • #3
    Sorrow 'rather a drag'? You can do better than that, Rhymist.

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    • grant hayes
      grant hayes commented
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      I don't. This is definitely an improvement, though. ☺

    • MHenry
      MHenry commented
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      Hi, RLW, We each have our own style. I like spare! spare! spare!
      I might have written SORROW), thusly...

      Sorrow
      for what I said
      Will you be here
      tomorrow?

    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      I like that one MHenry!

  • #4
    Talent abounds in each one. I especially liked the ones on glory and virtue. Wonderful execution!!

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you AtL! I wasn't sure about 'pursue' on the virtue one since I usually do strict rhyme, but I was getting tired of waiting for the words to come by then! I'm glad you like them!

  • #5
    I like this. In all its wondrous splendor.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thanks Odonko-ba! How have you been friend?

  • #6
    Great poetess. Thanks for asking.

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    • #7
      So many things to like here RhymeLovingWriter ...

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    • #8
      Wonderful. Have never heard of this style - like it!

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      • RhymeLovingWriter
        RhymeLovingWriter commented
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        Thanks Sumyanna - it was MHenry, as I recall - who introduced it to the zone.

    • #9
      Wow, that's boomerang blast indeed! 😊

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      • RhymeLovingWriter
        RhymeLovingWriter commented
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        Yes - I kept writing as long as the prompts kept presenting themselves!
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