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    Antithetical Situations

    I dream of rushing waves of ecstasy
    devouring kisses leaving me breathless
    Drowning in lust's gripping scent, endlessly
    Complete abandonment, wild and restless

    Carried away by eroticism
    Your forewarning words gently echoing
    Soft whisper challenging hedonism
    When I fall, I fall hard--love beckoning

    Your heart has been mistreated and broken
    Waiting for true love to share and heal you
    My heart brutally tortured and frozen
    Waiting for someone to thaw me completely through






  • #2
    Sounds like a match has been made! You excel in this format AtL - great verse.

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you very much RLW. There's always hope. :-)

  • #3
    I particularly like the ironic contrast between the clinical tone of the title and the ardent chiaroscuro of the verse itself. It's like a little wink that shows your humour without undermining the serious nature of the poem.

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  • #4
    A charming write Alexandra. You just put your desires out into the universe and the Law of Attraction will take it from here.

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  • #5
    A beautiful write. Brutally honest and forthright. I hope he's listening.

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  • #6
    Compelling write, AG! Two broken hearts in one relationship? That's gotta be a navigational challenge!

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      I am somewhat new to heartbreak -- romantically speaking -- I never expected that much pain and the affects, add that to the other person having gone through many heartbreaks. Very difficult for both to trust and put their hearts out there again. That's what I was trying to convey. Thank you for reading MH.

  • #7
    A broken bow a broken arrow the target will never feel complete. Beautiful !!

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    • #8
      Thank you very much The Second. :-)

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