Capture it~•

[One Wingless Angel]

There is just something about the way,
The outside world looks after it just rains-
A sorta glow on pavement, as greyness fades into the sky-
He takes me hand in his as if to say
I'm not the only one whose breath is taken away-
How could it get better than this?
Remember this, Capture it~•

And I don't know how anything could get more
Perfect than this-
Take me by the hand and spin me around-
Capture it, remember this;
It's so strange but I always Picture this in the back of my head-
Taking my hand to dance in my most beautiful dress-
Capture it, remember this...

[RhymeLovingWriter]

I'm not sure why - but I see this from a father/daughter perspective OWA - is that accurate? At first read I thought a love poem, but it changes for me with more reads. It paints a beautiful picture either way!

[grant hayes]

This really sings, One Wingless Angel. A beautifully phrased and shaped poem!

[MHenry]

Hi, Wingless One,

It sounds like a Cinderella story without the shoe. Every girl's dream. I hope it comes true.

[DWAYNE]

A fantasy well, told.

[One Wingless Angel]

Thanks for commenting on my poem. And I wrote this the way it is because it should be the reader who actually paints this picture in their mind; It could be a Princess story, a daughter with her father, a love poem or something else if you read my poem and interpret it into your own life ^_^

[grant hayes]

It works as all those things, and transmits genuine emotion. Readers can enter it and make it their own. That takes skill!

[RhymeLovingWriter]

I like that a lot OWA! I don't think I've learned that yet - thanks for a great example to follow!

[imrogue]

great work! love it!