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    With your mystical gaze
    Love hovered so divine.
    In your amber-brown eyes,
    The warmth I felt...
    as you gazed upon mine.

    Your lips were uttering words
    but I could discern none
    With your piercing gaze
    I faded into another realm.

    And in this realm.................................
    Euphoria engulfed my being
    and brought forth into my heart...
    ...utter contentment.



    By: Imrogue
    20150723
    Last edited by imrogue; 05-18-2016, 10:51 PM.

  • #2
    I melt into these words - very effective imrogue, and very beautiful.

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      thank you for reading and for your nice comment! 😊

  • #3
    Hi, imrogue, Very romantic and ... okay euphoric! It is hard to describe the feeling of being utterly captivated. No words, no painting can capture its essence. But you have come as close as any!

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    • #4
      Thanks for reading MHenry! Thanks for nice comment! 😊

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      • #5
        I'm hearing Roberta Flack singing "the first time". Add a chorus and you have a song. Although I already hear the music. Very romantic IMR!

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        • RhymeLovingWriter
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          That's a great song Bobby - I hear it too!

      • #6
        Very romantic. Very nice. :-).

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        • imrogue
          imrogue commented
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          Thank you AtL!

      • #7
        imrogue

        As i read this following lines, i felt the intoxicating effect of drinking Cognac with a lover...
        In your amber-brown eyes,
        The warmth I felt...
        as you gazed upon mine.


        Delicious!

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        • imrogue
          imrogue commented
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          transcended to your own euphoria.... 😊 The poem worked for you! I am glad! Thanks for reading!

        • imrogue
          imrogue commented
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          I was going to use hazel blue eyes but it did not sound too warm... lol
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