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    I have a slimy sticking feeling, spreading through my chest.
    If I went to the doctor, he would say, I need to rest.
    I can not lay, for when I try, my lungs feel all compressed.
    So now I sleep half up, half down, I'm feeling quite depressed.

    I have a pounding feeling, sledge hammering through my head.
    If I went to the doctor, he would send me off to bed.
    I can not make it to my room, my feet are full of lead.
    So now I have to settle here on this couch of dread.
    🤒😷😫

  • #2
    Oh dear Rach79 - I hope this isn't real time. If so, I hope you are better SOON. No fun at all.

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      It is unfortunately real 😕 thank you, though! At least I got a little inspiration, lol

  • #3
    Amazing how you took a mundane life situation and made a rhyming remedy. Feel better Rach!

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      Thanks Boe!

  • #4
    Your welcome friend!

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    • #5
      Hi, Rach, sorry for the malaise. It sounds like a cold or the flu, but the poem is healthy and vibrant!

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        Thank you
        A bad cold it is!
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