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  • Marmalade Sky

    The marmalade sky
    Extends to the horizon
    Violets and blues
    Shaded the canvas' hues
    Sun sets incredibly soon.





    20160514

  • #2
    I've been watching and looking for one from you. Excellent, beautiful imagery, delicious words -- invited my senses to enjoy your poem.

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      AlexandratheLate ...your words are very kind. Thanks for reading! 😊

  • #3
    Marmalade sky? Where's Lucy in the sky with diamonds? 😉

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    • #4
      Grant thanks for pointing out Lucy... I had to google what it was about... lol. I realized I heard the chorus of the song before but never noticed rest of the lyrics... well... Lucy must be somewhere in cosmos by now...I was just a year old when it was released... lol

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      • #5
        Hi, imrogue, a lovely image in tanka. The sun could be in the picture, or the painter could running out of sunlight, or both! I love it!

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        • imrogue
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          Thanks MHenry! that's my first Tanka! 😊
          btw, I meant to ask you...my 'Forever Blind' and 'Games for All Ages'...Could they be Boomerang?

      • #6
        Beautiful imagery! My favorite time of day!

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        • imrogue
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          Thanks for reading and for nice comments
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